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Loneliness by animeXloverXsvea Loneliness by animeXloverXsvea
gah i made this poem a week ago and its been stuck in my head because it sorta relates to me in a way so i finally decided to put it down and what not so tell me what you think of it and rate it i guess as to how good it is and sorry if there are any grammar errors

words: Loneliness is that of a double-edged sword It's the bitter sweetness of knowing that no one is there that can wound you with black-hearted words of rejection, judgment, unwant, and abuse. nevertheless to know that no one is there to protect you and love you with their words of Love, kindness, exception, and affection Leaves an ice-cold darkness painful to the touch Decaying your heart till there is nothing left but a black hole that knows nothing of love only agony.
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UkeDownUnder Featured By Owner Apr 21, 2012  Hobbyist Digital Artist
wait..how can you submit it to swedish-artist if you not swedish? XD or was you swedish? *I have bad memory lol*
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animeXloverXsvea Featured By Owner Apr 21, 2012  Hobbyist General Artist
oh no im swedish! XD thats one of the reasons i want to learn swedish ^
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UkeDownUnder Featured By Owner Apr 21, 2012  Hobbyist Digital Artist
lol! swedish but can't swedish! XD
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animeXloverXsvea Featured By Owner Apr 21, 2012  Hobbyist General Artist
ahah yeah its funny XDDDD my ancestors where vikings!! and im proud!
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UkeDownUnder Featured By Owner Apr 21, 2012  Hobbyist Digital Artist
lol! you should be! XD
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animeXloverXsvea Featured By Owner Apr 21, 2012  Hobbyist General Artist
ahaah yush~ :iconyesvictoryplz:
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UkeDownUnder Featured By Owner Apr 21, 2012  Hobbyist Digital Artist
lol! :icononionxdplz:
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UkeDownUnder Featured By Owner Apr 21, 2012  Hobbyist Digital Artist
aw~ beautiful :iconcblushplz:
I listened to [link] when I read it so it get a little weird XD
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animeXloverXsvea Featured By Owner Apr 21, 2012  Hobbyist General Artist
hahah god that would be weird XXDDDD
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UkeDownUnder Featured By Owner Apr 21, 2012  Hobbyist Digital Artist
yeah it was! XD
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